Reading guide
A refrain naming failure four different ways
The first four verses share their opening couplet exactly — ‘with fault-finding mind, the simpleton listens to the victor's instruction’ — each completed by a different image of failure: distance from the true teaching ‘as the earth is from the sky’, falling away ‘like the moon in the waning fortnight’, withering ‘like a fish in a little puddle’, and failing to thrive ‘like a rotten seed in a field’.
The exact same waning-moon simile as Thag 4.7
The second verse's image — kāḷapakkheva candimā, ‘like the moon in the waning fortnight’ — is word for word the same simile Thag 4.7 (Sambhūta) used for a fool's fortune wasting away, in the Book of the Fours. There, the image was paired with a mirrored waxing-moon counterpart within the same poem; here, it stands alone among three other failure images, the only one of the four this reading guide has found repeated elsewhere in this collection.
A fifth verse, extended and reversed
The fifth verse breaks the refrain entirely, both in content and in length — running to six lines rather than four, the only extension in this poem. ‘One with contented mind’ replaces the fault-finder, and the verse piles up four achievements in a row — defilements wiped out, the unshakable witnessed, ultimate peace arrived at — before closing on full extinguishment, the positive counterpart given more room than any of the four failures it answers.
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The text
§1With fault-finding mind, the simpleton listens to the victor’s instruction. They’re as far from the true teaching as the earth is from the sky.
§2With fault-finding mind, the simpleton listens to the victor’s instruction. They fall away from the true teaching, like the moon in the waning fortnight.
§3With fault-finding mind, the simpleton listens to the victor’s instruction. They wither away in the true teaching, like a fish in a little puddle.
§4With fault-finding mind, the simpleton listens to the victor’s instruction. They don’t thrive in the true teaching, like a rotten seed in a field.
§5But one with contented mind who listens to the victor’s instruction—having wiped out all defilements; having witnessed the unshakable; having arrived at ultimate peace—the undefiled are fully extinguished.”
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