Reading guide
A poem that narrates more than it declares
Only the first verse speaks in the unambiguous first person: ‘I've received ordination; I am liberated’. From the second verse onward, the poem shifts to narrating a scene — the Buddha settling for the night, ‘Gotama made his bed... like a lion in a rocky cave’ — and names its own speaker in the third person, ‘Soṇa... recited the true teaching’, even closing on a future-tense prediction about himself: ‘he'll be fully quenched’. This joins Thag 4.6 (Senaka) and Thag 5.6 (Nadīkassapa) among this collection's poems that step back from direct first-person declaration, but goes further than either in sustaining a narrated scene across most of its length.
A recitation this site can independently confirm
This site's own Ud 5.6 (With Soṇa) tells of a monk asking his mentor Mahākaccāna three times for ordination, waiting years for a monastic quorum, then traveling to recite an entire chapter of scripture from memory before the Buddha in person. This poem's ‘lovely enunciation’ (kalyāṇavākkaraṇo) recited ‘before the best of Buddhas’ matches that account's central detail closely enough that this reading guide treats the two as very plausibly the same monk, celebrated in both texts for the same skill.
The Buddha, described in formulaic epithets
The third verse's description of the Buddha resting — ‘like a lion in a rocky cave, with fear and dread given up’ — uses standing, formulaic language for the Buddha's fearlessness rather than an image unique to this poem, the kind of conventional epithet this collection has met before in poems of praise.
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The text
§1I’ve received ordination; I am liberated, without defilements; I’ve seen the Blessed One myself, and even stayed together with him.
§2The Blessed One, the teacher, spent much of the night in the open; then he, who is so skilled in meditation, entered his dwelling.
§3Spreading his outer robe, Gotama made his bed, like a lion in a rocky cave, with fear and dread given up.
§4Then, with lovely enunciation, Soṇa, a disciple of the Buddha, recited the true teaching before the best of Buddhas.
§5When he has completely understood the five aggregates, developed the direct route, and arrived at ultimate peace, undefiled, he’ll be fully quenched.
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