Reading guide
An eminence transferred, not simply abandoned
The opening verse doesn't describe Soṇakoḷivisa's worldly standing as something discarded for spiritual life; it transfers the very same word, ‘ukkaṭṭho’, ‘special’ or ‘eminent’, from his former royal service to his present standing in the Dhamma. The poem's opening move is a rhyme of status, not a renunciation of it.
A whole earlier poem quoted as a single verse
The second verse — ‘five to cut, five to drop, and five more to develop... when a mendicant slips five chains, they're said to have crossed the flood’ — is not paraphrase but exact quotation: this is the entire text of this site's own Thag 1.15 (Kuṇḍadhāna), a single-verse poem in the Book of the Ones, incorporated here word for word as this poem's own second verse. The same formulaic couplet also opens this site's SN 1.5, Cut How Many?, where a deity poses the riddle this verse answers.
The famous harp-string episode, told from inside
The seventh verse recounts, in first person, the teaching moment this elder is best remembered for: over -exerting himself in effort, he was taught through ‘the simile of the arched harp’ — a string too taut or too slack producing no good sound, just as spiritual effort too intense or too lax fails to produce results. This site's own AN 6.55, With Soṇa, already tells this same episode in full prose narrative; this poem gives its aftermath from the elder's own first-person perspective in four brief lines, where the prose account gives the teaching itself at length.
A structural pivot from narrative to sustained doctrine
After the seventh and eighth verses complete Soṇakoḷivisa's own story (the harp-string teaching, then the standard attainment formula), the poem's final five verses shift register entirely, addressing the reader directly in second person — ‘when you're dedicated to renunciation... your mind is rightly freed’ — before returning to third-person description for its closing images. A single poem moves through first-person narrative, second-person address, and third-person description in succession.
A solid rock, unmoved by wind: the poem's closing image
The twelfth and thirteenth verses close on a sustained simile: just as wind cannot stir ‘a solid mass of rock’, so sights, tastes, sounds, smells, touches, and ideas — liked or disliked alike — ‘don't disturb the unaffected one’, whose ‘mind is steady and unfettered as they observe fall’. This final stillness closes a poem that began with a string tuned to exactly the right tension.
Closing the Book of the Thirteens, a sixth exact tally
This single-chapter book moves directly from Soṇakoḷivisa's own self-naming to ‘Terasanipāto niṭṭhito’, ‘the Book of the Thirteens is concluded’, with no separate chapter marker. The Tatruddāna gives ‘ekoyeva mahiddhiko’, ‘the only one, of great psychic power’ — echoing the same ‘mahiddhika’ epithet already given collectively in Thag 12's closing uddāna. The stated tally, ‘thirteen verses’, matches this single thirteen-verse poem exactly, a sixth consecutive book (after the Sixes through Twelves) with a closing count that adds up cleanly.
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The text
§1He who was special in the kingdom, the footman to the king of Aṅga, today is special in the Dhamma—Soṇa has gone beyond suffering.
§2Five to cut, five to drop, and five more to develop. When a mendicant slips five chains they’re said to have crossed the flood.
§3If a monk is insolent and negligent, concerned only with externals, their ethics, immersion, and wisdom do not become fulfilled.
§4They dump what should be done, and do what should not be done. For the insolent and the negligent, their defilements only grow.
§5Those that have properly undertaken constant mindfulness of the body, don’t cultivate what should not be done, but always do what should be done. Mindful and aware, their defilements come to an end.
§6The straight path has been explained—go on it and don’t turn back. Urge yourself on and take yourself to extinguishment.
§7When my energy was over-exerted, the supreme Teacher in the world created the simile of the arched harp for me. The Clear-eyed One taught the Dhamma, and when I heard what he said, I happily did his bidding.
§8Practicing serenity of mind for the attainment of the highest goal. I’ve attained the three knowledges and fulfilled the Buddha’s instructions.
§9When you’re dedicated to renunciation and seclusion of the heart; when you’re dedicated to kindness and the end of grasping;
§10when you’re dedicated to the ending of craving and clarity of heart; and you’ve seen the arising of the senses, your mind is rightly freed.
§11For that one, rightly freed, a mendicant with peaceful mind, there’s nothing to be improved, and nothing more to do.
§12As the wind cannot stir a solid mass of rock, so too sights, tastes, sounds, smells, and touches—the lot—
§13and ideas, whether liked or disliked, don’t disturb the unaffected one. Their mind is steady and unfettered as they observe fall.
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