Reading guide
Blame reconsidered as blindness
The first two verses examine how people explain failure: someone who applies effort in the wrong direction calls it ‘a sign of my bad luck’, but the second verse complicates this — surrendering a misfortune ‘in part’ is merely unlucky, like losing at dice, but surrendering it ‘all’ requires being ‘blind’, unable to see ‘the even and the uneven’.
A verse this collection has now found three times
The third verse — ‘you should only say what you would do; you shouldn't say what you wouldn't do. The wise will recognize one who talks without doing’ — is word for word identical to Thag 3.3 (Bākula) and Thag 3.15 (Hārita 2nd)'s shared second verse, in the Book of the Threes. Where that earlier case was already this collection's most extensive duplication (three full verses shared between two poems), this is the first time a single verse from that pair has surfaced again in an entirely different book, attached to a third name.
A flower, with and without fragrance
The closing two verses complete the poem with a paired simile: well-spoken speech not acted on is like a ‘glorious flower that's colorful but lacks fragrance’, ‘fruitless’; speech matched by action is the same flower ‘both colorful and fragrant’, ‘fruitful’. The near-identical wording of the two verses, differing only in the single word for fragrance and its outcome, gives the poem its own small mirrored structure to close on, echoing this book's growing use of paired and repeated verses.
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The text
§1When a person, wishing for a certain outcome, applies themselves where they ought not; not achieving what they worked for, they say: “That’s a sign of my bad luck.”
§2When a misfortune is extracted and beaten, to surrender it in part would be like losing at dice; but to surrender it all you’d have to be blind, not seeing the even and the uneven.
§3You should only say what you would do; you shouldn’t say what you wouldn’t do. The wise will recognize one who talks without doing.
§4Just like a glorious flower that’s colorful but lacks fragrance; well-spoken speech is fruitless for one who does not act on it.
§5Just like a glorious flower that’s both colorful and fragrant, well-spoken speech is fruitful for one who acts on it.
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