Reading guide
A refrain repeated five times, the most extensive yet
Every one of this poem's five verses opens with the identical couplet — ‘the heavens rain like a sweet song; my hut is roofed and pleasant, sheltered from the wind’ — and closes with the identical invitation, ‘so rain forth, heavens, if you wish’. Only the middle description of the meditator changes: peaceful, at peace, free of greed, free of hate, free of delusion. This is the most extensive refrain this reading guide has found in this collection, surpassing the triple refrains of Thag 3.4 and Thag 3.11.
The Pali abbreviates what the translation spells out
From the third verse onward, the Pali text itself elides the repeated material with peyyala (‘...pe...’, ‘and so on’), trusting the reader to supply the couplet already given twice. Sujato's translation spells the repeated lines out in full regardless, so the English text below reads as five complete verses even where the Pali itself does not.
This collection's most-repeated couplet, once again
‘Channā me kuṭikā sukhā nivātā’, ‘my hut is roofed and pleasant, sheltered from the wind’, is the same line that opened this collection at Thag 1.1 (Subhūti) and returned across Thag 1.51–1.54's cluster of rain-and-hut poems in the Book of the Ones. This poem's fivefold repetition brings the total count of this exact line, across this collection, to at least six occurrences spanning two different books.
A progression: general peace, then the three roots
The five changing descriptions move from the general (‘peaceful’, ‘mind at peace’) to the specific: free of greed, free of hate, free of delusion — the three roots of unwholesome action named in sequence, closing the poem on the most technical and complete formulation of the five.
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The text
§1The heavens rain like a sweet song; my hut is roofed and pleasant, sheltered from the wind; I meditate there, peaceful: so rain forth, heavens, if you wish.
§2The heavens rain like a sweet song; my hut is roofed and pleasant, sheltered from the wind; I meditate there, my mind at peace: so rain forth, heavens, if you wish.
§3The heavens rain like a sweet song; my hut is roofed and pleasant, sheltered from the wind; I meditate there, free of greed: so rain forth, heavens, if you wish.
§4The heavens rain like a sweet song; my hut is roofed and pleasant, sheltered from the wind; I meditate there, free of hate: so rain forth, heavens, if you wish.
§5The heavens rain like a sweet song; my hut is roofed and pleasant, sheltered from the wind; I meditate there, free of delusion: so rain forth, heavens, if you wish.
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